Blog Critique

I 'interviewed' one of my viewers, asking what they thought about the blog. This is what she said:

"When you post you on the blog all of your posts are the same; different, but the same. They're about the same things. But when it is interesting, rarely, you only skim the surface or 'test the water with your pinkie toe.' Broadening on the post would be great. When you just talk about it a little bit, it gets good, and then it gets gone. Dig deep, don't be scared."

What I think I could do better is as following:

If I could do a little better with my posts; they aren't long, or informative, enough. If anyone else wants to help me get better at anything, tell me.

Road Side Rot

Today, driving home, I was looking out the car window at the roadsides. All I saw were tall grasses, plastic bags, food rappers, paper, and dead animals. This is not pleasing to anybody, I KNOW it. When people are out driving around the want at least to have a scenic view, with out trash clouding the vision. People shouldn't litter for lots of reasons, but this is another that might not be listed as often: When people litter the smell of food rappers draws the attention of scavenging animals. When they walk out into the road to find something to eat, chances are, they'll get hit. No body wants to see that! Or, more importantly, do that! Littering is a CRIME, a federal offense (or something like that). If you are caught littering you will be assigned community service, or worse. We need to think about what we're doing to our world. It's the only one we've got.

Car Fumes

Last night around 9:30 my family and I were coming back from a celebration. When we went down Miller Street and a car came down the street in front of us, its exhaust was so thick it made a thick fog on the road. This is an example of pollution. Pollution is not good for our atmosphere. I recommend that we, the kids, schedule a biking day. please comment to give dates that you think it would be appropriate. Thank you.

Any Questions?

Do you have any questions or comments? I want to know what you think about this blog.
You haven't said anything in a very long time. Tell me what I can do to improve this blog, if you're reading this post you ought to speak up.

Let's Help the Homeless

This summer my sister and I are going to help the homeless people that we see at the busy intersections. We are going to give them things like:

A sandwich or beenie weenies
crackers
gummies
bottled water
a cookie
a spoon
socks
and gum


You should help them to. It's not fair that they have to go through this because a stupid slip of paper. So we should use our stupid slips of paper to help Them.

20 Ways You Can Protect the Ocean (From: Oceans By:Johnna Rizzo)

1.Get Moving. Bike and walk as much as possible to keepchemicals from running off into waterways.

2.Don't release pets pets, such as fish or snakes, into rivers, lakes, or oceans. Non-native animals can harm an ecosystem.

3.Participate in beach and river clean-ups.

4.Be a water moniter. Report water leaks or drips at home, school, and every other place you go.

5. Take showers rather than baths. Baths may only use a certin amount of water but quick showers use even less.

6. Never Ever release helium ballons into the air, it could harm animals like sea turtles who think they are food.

7.Mash left over soap slivers together to make more and keep it from going down the drain.

8.Avoid using the toilet as a trash can Don't put gum, paper, ect. into a toilet, it's bad for the water!

9.SCOOP THE POOP! Pet feces are also a water pollutant, so, PICK IT UP!

10.When your family stays at a hotel reuse towels wash clothes and sheets.

11. Paint "NO DUMPING" on storm drains (with non toxic paint)

12.Reuse water bottles!

13.Water plants in the morning, water doesn't evaporate as fast when the air is cool.

14.Recycle!!!!!!

15.Volunteer at an aquarium to learn about marine life.

16. Scrape left overs into the trash instead of making compost.

17.Leash law! dogs can scare away animals that live on the beach.

18. Only buy what you NEED. (definitoin of need: nesscisary for life!)

19. Don't feed wild animals, they need to be able to provide for themselves.

20. Share these tips with friends and family!






*I don't get the piont of #16 it's sort of stupid! Down with trash! Compost is a yes!!!*

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